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Jon (Animated)'s avatar

Poor Pam! I was holding my breath by the end.

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Jules's avatar

😄 Don't worry Jon. Pam’s tough. Thanks for reading 😊

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Angie Graham's avatar

Oh my goodness Jules, what a masterpiece !! Nail bitting and gripped to the end. Poor Pam what a unassuming heroine. You're a dab hand at fiction too 😍. Multifaceted skills 💯% Luv this!! 😀

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Jules's avatar

😊Thrilled that you enjoyed it, Angie. Thanks for the lovely feedback - Pam's brave alright, but she'd better watch the booze 😉

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Hilary Hattenbach's avatar

What a nail-biter, Jules! Pam is a great heroine and I love that she didn't even realize her tormentor had died. Excellent pacing and writing! Poor Tommy. Will be there be a part 3? Meanwhile, why aren't you writing a crime book series??

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Jules's avatar

Thanks so much H2 - and for the amazing restack! 😍

I had never thought of writing fiction until this idea occurred to me. The positive feedback following part one made me think that a second part might be fun, and it was interesting to try to devise a plot with a twist. I hope that's what came over.

There may be more - I was interested to see whether readers would like Pam as much as I do, and it's great to get your very positive take. Thanks so much 🙏x

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Hilary Hattenbach's avatar

Love Pam! We're all Pam!

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miter's avatar

Intriguing story and character- enjoyed it!

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Jules's avatar

Thanks, Miter! Glad you enjoyed 😊

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Margaret Bennett's avatar

Brilliant. So visual. I can picture everything. I’m very glad Pam is off the hook, but poor Tommy. A fantastic read Jules.

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Jules's avatar

Thanks very much, Margaret, that's exactly what I was aiming for 🤞! Thanks for reading x

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Margaret Bennett's avatar

It was my pleasure. Thank you.

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